GS专题
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Give details of the applicant's current circumstances, including ties to family, community, employment and economic circumstances.· Reason to choose Australia rather than home country (Mandatory, must show effort of research)
· If a similar course is available in the home country, the reason to choose Australia (Mandatory, must show effort of research)
· Family ties to home country (Mandatory)
· Community ties to home country
· Employment status and history (Mandatory)
· Financial and economic status (Mandatory, must show who will fund the study, whether funding is sufficient and sustainable, general financial status of the applicant him/her-self and the applicant’s family)
Explain why the applicant wishes to study this course in Australia with this particular education provider including their understanding of the requirements of the intended course and studying and living in Australia.
· The advantages of the education provider.
· It is necessary to make the explanation based on the actual courses selected by the student. For example, some outstanding advantages, such as providing internship in the last semester.
· If you have studied similar majors in your home country, you need to explain why you want to further your study of this major in Australia.
· If the major in your home country is not related to the major in Australia, you need to provide a reasonable explanation of changing the direction of your study.
Explain how completing the course will be of benefit to the applicant.
· Whether the intended course is consistent with your past employment and academic history (Mandatory)
· How would the intended course help you obtain employment in your home country or another country and your career potential in your home country or another country (Mandatory, must show effort of research)
· Potential level of salary in the home country or another country (must show effort of research if discussing this topic)
Give details of any other relevant information the applicant would like to include.
· Addressing previous visa refusal, cancellation, overstaying in any countries
· Addressing previous incompletion of any courses in Australia
· Addressing all the significant study gaps
· Addressing all the course change (especially changes to unrelated course), patterned course deferral and course change, education provider change
· Addressing all the illogical course progression (e.g. down grading, concurrent course loads)
Provide a detailed history of the applicant's study record in Australia from the date of first arrival.
· Format:
o dd mm yyyy to dd mm yyyy, Course Name, Provider, Completed/Incomplete/In-progress
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Give details of the applicant's current circumstances, including ties to family, community, employment and economic circumstances.
答
个人简介,已婚还是未婚,如果毕业到目前有GAP,在做什么?父母是什么工作?他们的年收入多少?他们是否支持你的出国留学计划?准备了多少担保金?
为什么出国读书而不在国内读?
问
Explain why the applicant wishes to study this course in Australia with this particular education provider including their understanding of intended course and studying and living in Australia.
答
为什么选择去澳洲而不是其他国家?
为什么选择这个学校而不是澳洲的其他学校 ?
对于这个专业的了解。例如要读多长时间,学费是多少,要学多少个学分,有哪些必修课选修课,自己对于哪一门课格外感兴趣等。
将来在澳洲的住宿计划以及为什么要选择这种住宿方式?
问
Explain how completing the course will be of benefit to the applicant.
答
学习这个课程对于你将来找工作或者职场晋升的好处,务必在这部分认真准备,提供准确且有说服力的内容。对比无留学经历国内同等情况的毕业生,我有哪些方面的优势?
将来的学习或者就业计划:例如,是否计划继续读硕士或者博士课程?想在哪里工作?什么行业?什么职位?是否有心仪的企业?预计刚开始的年收入情况等。强调回国发展的必要性(例如留在澳洲工作的话,可能收入更高。2023年3月了解到的几封拒签信都是写澳洲的起薪更高,怀疑学生不会回国。I am not satisfied the financial incentives to return home outweigh the financial incentives to remain in Australia)
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Give details of any other relevant information the applicant would like to include.
答
为什么要读这个专业(尤其是有工作经验的申请人)或者转专业的原因?过往持有澳洲签证记录,签证拒签或者签证取消的说明,study gap (半年以上)说明,工作经验等。